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[Mohaa Tutorial (flash mx)]

Err

This Needs:

Health
Level Design Tutorial
Scoring system

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I've managed to make a quite great first person shooter, I just need to figure out how to make it so you win when you have a set number of score in a dynamic text box. Oh, do help me with something. I have a empty dynamic text box which is increased by 10 each time you shoot an enemy. It has the variable "score" without the ""s. I have the following code:

if (_root.score == 250); {
gotoAndPlay(1571);
}

And as soon as I start up the game, it goes right to 1571, without anything in the score box yet.

Wonderer responds:

Sorry for repond a month later. lol. Ok the problem might be there is some code that you forgot to take off on the first frame. If it still doesn't work. change == to >= bigger than. If it still doesn't work. Just add me on msn or aim. I will be happy to help you

[Family Guy Sound Board]

Not bad

But not great. Not bad for a first submission. A word of advice is try using a more graphical layout. But for what it was supposed to be, I liked it, but for a V. 2 which I suggest, add more characters.

bluecow90 responds:

Thank You for taking the time to review my submission, I was concerned that people might not enjoy it as much as I hoped.

[A tour in the mansion]

AWSOME!

CAN U PLZ TELL ME WHERE U GOT ELEVATOR MUSIC FROM FINAL FANTASY 9?? PLZ PLZ AWSOME MAN THX IN ADVANCED!

Old-Erkefiende responds:

thanks,
the alevator music was black mage village you can download it somehow, I think you know :D